Your commercial is good, I like your group background music because it's exciting and cool. The content in your commercial is pretty good, but I can't hear it very well because of the quality. The vocabulary and the conclusion is good. How you delivery your commercial need improvements on the speaking voice and the volume, I thought the grammar was good. The music and sound effects is great, but u need more effects. You also did very well on transition, but u need to improve on volume and length.
Your commercial is good, I like your group background music because it's exciting and cool. The content in your commercial is pretty good, but I can't hear it very well because of the quality. The vocabulary and the conclusion is good. How you delivery your commercial need improvements on the speaking voice and the volume, I thought the grammar was good. The music and sound effects is great, but u need more effects. You also did very well on transition, but u need to improve on volume and length.
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